And More Notes Book 1

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Page 18 to 20 of pdf absolute pdf numbering

page 8 Maybe put explanation ahead of these
           Table 4 ? instead of 3

page 3 ___(of ?) Players
        3A * Prime requisites
        * Explain what Prime Requisite's are and more importantly how they will be used

4. Point range in level example, Median is 0-10 pts
Do players want high No's or low  (no's is numbers)

5. Gold Pieces: for possible investment in the _____ under (not sure what goes in the blank

Intelligence prime requisite used how? Explain

6 An expanded example please
If this note wasn't here the reader would have no idea what you're talking about
Table 1 +1 spot(??) (+1 what ) and a few letters I can't read

10. Movement will be fully explained below. Where? ____ what unit? (can't read what is in the blank)

11. Can't serve in the Underworld Why not?

I would strip repeated unnecessary references. This is _______(not sure "obscure" maybe

how about "you cannot hire persons equal to or above your station

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12. b_tt__ needs more details (can't make out first word)

13. What is he unreadable talking about. Needs more expanding bottom

15. Highest levels note increase add points to level examples needed

16. explain how etc. exp for other things example can ____ and make ___ party (not sure)

16a. more detail

17. above examples below outline step 1, 2, etc.

18. Exp Pts Table maybe set apart from general paragraph

19. Table 6 Step(?) set-up

20. _____(??) how about including hit dice for creatures here?

21. ____ of _____ new system needed.

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5. Gold Pieces: for possible investment in the careers under

Intelligence prime requisite used how? Explain

6 An expanded example please
If this note wasn't here the reader would have no idea what you're talking about
Table 1 +1 spot (+1 what) cap.

10. Movement will be fully explained below. Where? above what unit?

11. Can't serve in the Underworld Why not?

I would strip repeated unnecessary references. This is ____ <absence,assonance,essence> -I'd accept it to say essence. I really couldn't decipher it any better and went to trying to follow the "spirit" of the sentence.

how about "you cannot hire persons equal to or above your station

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12. bottom needs more details
13. What is he (calling -then he scribbled it out) talking about. Needs more expanding bottom

15. Highest levels note increase add points to level examples needed

16. explain how etc. exp for other things
example. can wizard make teleporting

16a. more detail

17. above examples below outline step 1, 2, etc.

18. Exp Pts Table maybe set apart from general paragraph

19. Table 6 Step set up

20. Level3 how about including hit dice for creatures here?

21. Recovery of wounds new system needed.

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Thanks paintballdays for the help, you have good eyes and reading skills.

[paintballdays]

Page 19. Someone with a higher History or Religion score may know more for certain about 21.A.


21.A. #(?) of Masks(?) Zyrenng(?) (Zagyg, Zagig Yragerne reference perhaps?) simplify to involved examples

22. Men vs. Fantasy Fig. hits equal to a die roll (1-6) why

22 A. (First/List) two (searches -misspelled?) what?

26. castles change

27. Clerics Drop or change

3 Prize Metrix Better display & explanation.

32 (Jewelry?) for base 100 roll three dice and multiply by 100. what sum?

36. see chainmail or (Mirliton?)

37. Angry Villages Vague set rules?

39A. Hold portal which one is the rule? Explain. Is presence the only criterion or must a Magic User use a counter spell?
Protection from Evil which ones?

39B. C.P. How do you determine if it's successful
Lev. give (Lev3) limitations and how high?

39C. D.E. what about magic resistance rules.
L-3P. How about a telepaths part to
this spell
Fly secret from magic user

39.D. (tip/top.?) added or (sub) to what?

39.E. R.C. does level matter?

W of F. How may they and what do they do if the wizard freezes them in it?

Con. How long does your confusion spell last? Add some duration rule

39.F (Tip/Top?) Points damage when they hit ground? How about saving throw when low?
M.E. Add something about creating cracks in earth, (length) dependant on level.

39.G. W of F;s. How do you knockdown if you can

A.D. for how long and what
(control?)

M.J. ? Isn't this possession.

39.H. D.E. but should be (wtf?)

39.I. (A.D.)? add plague rule

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21A to 39, now you are ahead of me, so I will post my take before I read yours.

[Morose]

It would have been so much fun to have been in the middle of this while the rules were being written. That was a special time and place to be.