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Post by mao on Sept 3, 2022 9:31:38 GMT -5
another big plot point the canals
The canals are patroled by a good guy city. They impose a reasonble tax , to run the canals and patrol
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Post by Bad to the Bone on Sept 3, 2022 11:11:39 GMT -5
Super science weoan The telepathis he;mit it looks like a clock work nightmare, it is huge It used to be telepathic anyway now it is a mental assault helmet, once it runs out of power, it's an ugly hat. It hould do a lot of damge ubtil it powers down. Is this in code?
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Post by Bad to the Bone on Sept 3, 2022 11:15:29 GMT -5
Thereis an old70's comic called Ironwood or Ironwolf I will use that as my innsparation(Art by a young Howard Chaken) It is definitely Ironwolf rather than Ironwood because the latter would require you to confess!
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Post by Bad to the Bone on Sept 3, 2022 11:16:27 GMT -5
Atala_Kor ah The princess of all Her beauty is beyonde compare. From her graefll ...ankles to her suple...hair she is unmatched She has the Heart of The Devil What is graefll and what is suple?
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Post by mao on Sept 3, 2022 12:19:06 GMT -5
Atala_Kor ah The princess of all Her beauty is beyonde compare. From her graefll ...ankles to her suple...hair she is unmatched She has the Heart of The Devil What is graefll and what is suple? Edited to make it clearer
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Post by mao on Sept 3, 2022 12:19:47 GMT -5
Super science weoan The telepathis he;mit it looks like a clock work nightmare, it is huge It used to be telepathic anyway now it is a mental assault helmet, once it runs out of power, it's an ugly hat. It hould do a lot of damge ubtil it powers down. Is this in code? edited to be clearer
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Post by Bad to the Bone on Sept 3, 2022 12:33:46 GMT -5
What is graefll and what is suple? Edited to make it clearer Somehow, you made it less clear. I still don't know what word graefll is supposed to be or suple and what is herl?
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Post by Bad to the Bone on Sept 3, 2022 12:34:49 GMT -5
You fixed the first part, but what is " It hould do a lot of damge ubtil it powers down."?
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Post by Bad to the Bone on Sept 3, 2022 12:37:27 GMT -5
May I humbly suggest that you write out your ideas and then when you post them, edit for spelling, word usage and punctuation. I am not perfect myself; however, I have noticed this forum has a spell check that underlines misspelled words, so you cannot miss them.
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Post by mao on Sept 3, 2022 12:49:07 GMT -5
May I humbly suggest that you write out your ideas and then when you post them, edit for spelling, word usage and punctuation. I am not perfect myself; however, I have noticed this forum has a spell check that underlines misspelled words, so you cannot miss them. my creative is often far pacing w my spelling and as is happening now i can only type one handed(both arms are recoovering from breaks,)the consensis amoung us said they would rather i post one handed than not
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Post by Bad to the Bone on Sept 3, 2022 13:21:42 GMT -5
May I humbly suggest that you write out your ideas and then when you post them, edit for spelling, word usage and punctuation. I am not perfect myself; however, I have noticed this forum has a spell check that underlines misspelled words, so you cannot miss them. my creative is often far pacing w my spelling and as is happening now i can only type one handed(both arms are recoovering from breaks,)the consensis amoung us said they would rather i post one handed than not I can understand that; however, I would be remiss in not pointing out that your lack of spelling and punctuation, as well as, missing words and context dates all the way back to your first post. I and my friends have been lurking for years. So while you currently have an excuse, for the most part you did not. Sorry about the broken arms by the way and sure, by all means, keep posting. But once your arms are better you have to clean this up, you could go mainstream if you did. I suggest that once you get the use of both hands back, you edit every post over a period of time. My attempt below to convert your statement into English. mao, I am going to withhold my exalts for your work until such time that your posts are (starting to be) cleaned up. That does not mean you have to be working on that right now, but I think we should hold our exalts until you up your posting quality. So down the road you can get a huge amount of love at one time and then going forward. Gives you something to look forward to and to motivate your recovery.
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Post by mao on Sept 3, 2022 14:18:19 GMT -5
@bttbi really like the fact that you will accept the flaws...for now, truly does motivate me.
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Post by mao on Sept 5, 2022 13:21:24 GMT -5
The Farm pack
They have almost total control of the water, forming a 5 nation north to south on the main 3 canals, The barbarians are a constant threat to life giving water. lthough it is controled compleatly TFP alows a small amount of water further to the south, enuff for the nation states below can farm and survive
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Post by dilvish on Sept 9, 2022 11:09:09 GMT -5
Edited to make it clearer Somehow, you made it less clear. I still don't know what word graefll is supposed to be or suple and what is herl? Enquiring minds want to know mao!
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Post by dilvish on Sept 9, 2022 11:09:59 GMT -5
The real question is, "Are there dungeons?"
John Carter found dungeons, can we find dungeons?
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Post by Bad to the Bone on Sept 12, 2022 22:21:01 GMT -5
Somehow, you made it less clear. I still don't know what word graefll is supposed to be or suple and what is herl? Enquiring minds want to know mao ! He is right mao, we still want to know what those words mean.
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Post by Bad to the Bone on Sept 12, 2022 22:21:32 GMT -5
The real question is, "Are there dungeons?" John Carter found dungeons, can we find dungeons? I too, want to know, are there dungeons?
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Post by mao on Sept 13, 2022 6:19:56 GMT -5
Sure,you guys can have dungeons
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Post by Bad to the Bone on Sept 13, 2022 11:21:18 GMT -5
Sure,you guys can have dungeoncIs that your own personal version of dungeons?
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Post by mao on Sept 13, 2022 11:24:58 GMT -5
The Lost Cavern of the Torrid(Torrid is the discoverer
From a time when the atmosphere plant was offline, lots of pressure rooms that contain lost tech and one of the very few places that have zombies and ghosts
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Post by mao on Sept 15, 2022 8:44:26 GMT -5
Chars start at 2nd Level fighters or clerics
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Post by mao on Sept 21, 2022 7:59:42 GMT -5
Aton-Voor is a small city at the n pole. It is very cosmopolitan but basicly is a UN like where veterans are welcome to retire(sort of like the Romans would do) from any army. It is a rough town but the military will step n if things get out of control.. It is supposed to protect the atmosphere plant and does a fair job of it. They are always looking for mercenaries to scout and make commando raides
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Post by mao on Sept 21, 2022 8:01:26 GMT -5
I have resisted but thhis is worthy of being more tan a one thread world, so it is getting a promotion!
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